For this first activity you will check a video about wine. After doing so, write a summary of each single variety of wine presented in the video. Do not forget to include key aspects of each one.
Have fun!!
Ps: The deadline for you to fulfill this activity is February 25th (Tuesday) 4:00 pm. I will not count any entry after that time.
Daniel felipe arévalo orozco
ResponderEliminarthis video talk about red wines, in this case the pinot noir, merlot, cabernet sauvignon and shiraz, the enology women described the kind of grapes, and waht is the color the flavor and the aroma, talk about how time pass the wine in barrels, the pairing of the one of the wines, she describes all about the grapes when and where the grapes growed for the type of wine.
this video talk(1) about red wines, in this case the pinot noir, merlot, cabernet sauvignon and shiraz (2), the enology women described the kind of grapes, and waht is the color the flavor and the aroma (3), talk (4) about how time pass (5) the wine in barrels, the pairing of the one (6) of the wines, she describes all about the grapes when and where the grapes growed (7) for the type of wine (8).
Eliminar1. Present simple
2. Capitalization on proper names. i.e. Shiraz
3. Spelling/question structure for a sentence
4. Who talkS?
5. Check the structure (if time, then passES; however, goes is more appropiate)
6. Which one?
7. Check the past tense
8. What type of wine?
You’ve missed some very important details. Remember, details are the difference between a good and a shallow summary; nontheless, to be the first attempt, it is generally good.
The three kind of wine are: Pinot noir, Merlot and cabernet sauvignon.
ResponderEliminarPinot noir: This is geat varierity, that has been grown in burgundy since the twhelft century, it is ligther and love spectrum wine, it is delivery color and flavor intensity, flavor that it seductive and desirable, it is coveted and collectible, it is a cool climate style, it is a little brighter, that works well whit sea food.
Merlot: that is grown in cold places, sun places like California, it is easier to tell them apart on the nose,to give a little herbal quality, it is a little bit darker and little bit blackberries, strawberries and cranberries.
Cabernet sauvignon: Has resemblance to merlot, it is the dark fruit balckberrie and cherry range, it is quality herbal, flavor that chocolate and coffe intense
The three kind (1) of wine are: Pinot noir (2), Merlot and cabernet (2) sauvignon (2). Pinot noir (2): This is geat varierity (3), that has been grown in burgundy since the twhelft (4) century, it is ligther (4) and love (6) spectrum wine, it is delivery color and flavor intensity (3), flavor that it (3) seductive and desirable, it is coveted and collectible, it is a cool climate style, it is a little brighter, that works well whit (4) sea food. Merlot: that is grown in cold places, sun (4) places like California, it is easier to tell them apart on (3) the nose, to give a little herbal quality, it is a little bit darker and little bit blackberries, strawberries and cranberries (3). Cabernet sauvignon (1): Has (5) resemblance to merlot, it is the dark fruit balckberrie (4) and cherry range, it is (3) quality herbal, flavor that chocolate and coffe (4) intense
Eliminar1. Plural form
2. Capitalization i.e Pinot Noir
3. Revision needed – sentence needs something to convey its real meaning
4. Spelling correction
5. Who has it?
Very good summary. Just check on the revision I made.