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Angelica Serrano: In this video talk about some wines which are pinot noir, merlot, sauvignon, cabertnet ,siharz and we have every one of the characteristics of the wines all the smell, flavor, and organoleptic characteristics, in relation to the white meat and seafood , we talk about the food convinations pairing, we speak of the time which remains in the barrel, we talk about the weather which remains in the barrel, that we named him cabernet sauvignon skin removed, and tell us that more fine wine is wine red.
In this video talk (5) about some wines which are pinot (2) noir (2), merlot (2), sauvignon (2), cabertnet ,siharz(4, 5) and we have every one of the characteristics of the wines all the smell (3), flavor, and organoleptic characteristics, in relation to the white meat and seafood , we talk about the food convinations (1) pairing, (6) we speak of the time which remains in the barrel (3), we talk about the weather which remains in the barreo (3), that we named him (6) cabernet sauvignon skin removed (3), and tell us that more fine (6) wine is wine red.
1. Plural form 2. Capitalization i.e Pinot Noir 3. Revision needed – sentence needs something to convey its real meaning 4. Spelling correction 5. Who does it? 6. Punctuation or gramatical mistake
Good review, but you have missed some of the important details that are proper of every kind on grape breed.
1 the history tell us about a man, he was sick, he narrated the history himself and tell us about him sickness,he had a terrible headache, he had cough, and he can´t rised up of him bed i all afternoon,his mother cared him and to the another day dawned best, but his mom was sick. 2because his sickness was normal had headache. 3cause he just had sick a day. 4i was sick in the past week, i had headache, fever, sore throat, it was horrible, i was sick all week. 5 my mom was watching me and she cooked some soup and juices for me, i was covered and i protected me of cold, and rainy days. MARIA PAULA GONZALEZ B INGLES 3
1.In your very own words say: what happened to the person who is telling the story (mention tha kind of sickness and some details related to it)? R: the person who is telling the story has a strong flu symptoms mentioned according to us, it might be strep because the upset he gives is general and is also too strong 2. Why do you believe he/she had a headache? R: on his head ached and I had a strong flu that altered his body 3. Why do you believe he/she didn't have have a fever? R: he had no fever and it was a great start of the flu that was going to give 4. When was the last time you got sick? What symptoms did you have? R: sick the last time I gave a strong cold, my head ached, and had lots of nasal congestion my eyes hurt and did not feel like doing anything 5. How did you recover from your sickness? R: I better taking care of the cold, and taking medicines
Angelica Serrano: In this video talk about some wines which are pinot noir, merlot, sauvignon, cabertnet ,siharz and we have every one of the characteristics of the wines all the smell, flavor, and organoleptic characteristics, in relation to the white meat and seafood , we talk about the food convinations pairing, we speak of the time which remains in the barrel, we talk about the weather which remains in the barrel, that we named him cabernet sauvignon skin removed, and tell us that more fine wine is wine red.
ResponderEliminarIn this video talk (5) about some wines which are pinot (2) noir (2), merlot (2), sauvignon (2), cabertnet ,siharz(4, 5) and we have every one of the characteristics of the wines all the smell (3), flavor, and organoleptic characteristics, in relation to the white meat and seafood , we talk about the food convinations (1) pairing, (6) we speak of the time which remains in the barrel (3), we talk about the weather which remains in the barreo (3), that we named him (6) cabernet sauvignon skin removed (3), and tell us that more fine (6) wine is wine red.
Eliminar1. Plural form
2. Capitalization i.e Pinot Noir
3. Revision needed – sentence needs something to convey its real meaning
4. Spelling correction
5. Who does it?
6. Punctuation or gramatical mistake
Good review, but you have missed some of the important details that are proper of every kind on grape breed.
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ResponderEliminar1 the history tell us about a man, he was sick, he narrated the history himself and tell us about him sickness,he had a terrible headache, he had cough, and he can´t rised up of him bed i all afternoon,his mother cared him and to the another day dawned best, but his mom was sick.
ResponderEliminar2because his sickness was normal had headache.
3cause he just had sick a day.
4i was sick in the past week, i had headache, fever, sore throat, it was horrible, i was sick all week.
5 my mom was watching me and she cooked some soup and juices for me, i was covered and i protected me of cold, and rainy days.
MARIA PAULA GONZALEZ B
INGLES 3
ResponderEliminar1.In your very own words say: what happened to the person who is telling the story (mention tha kind of sickness and some details related to it)?
R: the person who is telling the story has a strong flu symptoms mentioned according to us, it might be strep because the upset he gives is general and is also too strong
2. Why do you believe he/she had a headache?
R: on his head ached and I had a strong flu that altered his body
3. Why do you believe he/she didn't have have a fever?
R: he had no fever and it was a great start of the flu that was going to give
4. When was the last time you got sick? What symptoms did you have?
R: sick the last time I gave a strong cold, my head ached, and had lots of nasal congestion my eyes hurt and did not feel like doing anything
5. How did you recover from your sickness?
R: I better taking care of the cold, and taking medicines